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For the nth time , it was believed as the coming out of some shitty hot celeb. For the nth time , it was magnified into the confessions of a ...

Hm..I like this, Linds, but I don't see what this have to do with an illusion. Also, you had good rhythm in the first stanza. It kind of fades in ...

This is really good, Linds. I really love your rhythm and rhyming in this piece. I also love the emotion expressed. Also, nice word choice and flow. Good work. Keep ...

This is amazing. I love your rhyming and rhythm. This is really sad too. I liked how you expressed the emotion into this piece. Keep up the good work! -Rick.

This are really beautiful, Timea. I really like all three. I do like the first one the best though. Very good job. -Rick.

XD It is very beautiful, Razor. How did the holes get into it though? -Rick.

Haha. Very cute pic, Linds. You're really good at drawing. Keep up the good work! -Rick.

Wow, that's really good, Crysi. I liked the flow and rhythm in both stanzas. I liked how you described the feeling of losing someone you love and them lying to ...

I really liked the flow into this. This is really good, Crysi. I do, however, want to point out each stanza is an on-going setence. Try to change the last ...

Ok, here to do my profile. Name- Shoe Speices- Swarve Age- 17 Hair Colour- Dark brown Eye colour- Dark brown Personality- Stays to himself, is kind of rude. He's kind ...

Welcome to YWS. I'm Rick. I hope you enjoy the site as much as we all do. After you get 25 reviews, you can access the YWS chatroom and talk ...

My opinion on abortion: I think it's sick and wrong to do that to a baby. But, isn't there stem cell research? And, I think if ther abortion has to ...

I think the colleges shouldn't jugde by: Sex, race, etc. But, by test scores. So, it's fair for everyone. Just have a standardized test and see who gets what score. ...